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Proj 4 Peer Review

December 1, 2009 at 4:21 pm | Posted in Uncategorized | Leave a comment

The first thing i need to do when revising my essay is to lengthen up my body paragraphs. MY rough draft is a little short and needs a conclusion as well. I need more evidence to support my argument. I think a good way to do this would be by using some outside sources and thrwing a couple quotes in there to support my essay. My essay is far from dona nd definately needs to be fine tuned and lengthened.

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